From 903947cd6de766d25d36a083406c0325ecff1781 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: theorangeangle <36866626+theorangeangle@users.noreply.github.com>
Date: Sun, 17 Nov 2019 23:21:50 -0600
Subject: [PATCH] small changes to improve grammar and flow

---
 locale/en/redmew_maps.cfg | 26 +++++++++++++-------------
 1 file changed, 13 insertions(+), 13 deletions(-)

diff --git a/locale/en/redmew_maps.cfg b/locale/en/redmew_maps.cfg
index 8cc89dd7..1e021316 100644
--- a/locale/en/redmew_maps.cfg
+++ b/locale/en/redmew_maps.cfg
@@ -70,24 +70,24 @@ replay_cutscene=To replay the introduction, use the __1__ command
 cutscene1_case_line2=Welcome to __1__
 cutscene1_case_line4=This is a custom scenario developed by __1__
 cutscene1_case_line5=Join us at __1__
-cutscene1_case_line6=The following introduction will help you get started!
+cutscene1_case_line6=The following introduction will help you get started playing!
 cutscene1_case1_line1=This is the starting area. It has a market and a coin mint.
-cutscene1_case1_line2=The coin mint produces coins at a limited rate.
+cutscene1_case1_line2=The coin mint produces coins at a limited rate, upgradable at the market.
 cutscene1_case1_line3=Coins can also be obtained by killing biters,spitters,worms and spawners.
 cutscene1_case2_line1=Coins are used to buy items at the market.
-cutscene1_case3_line1=This concludes the introduction.
+cutscene1_case3_line1=This, along with the ore patches and wall, is your spawn. Onto the outposts.
 
-cutscene2_case_line1=This is an "Outpost".
+cutscene2_case_line1=This is an "Outpost". They come in many shapes and sizes, with everything from Iron Plates to MK2 Armor.
 cutscene2_case_line2=You will find many structures similar to this dotted across the map.
-cutscene2_case0_line1=It is defended by enemy turrets.
-cutscene2_case0_line2=You must capture the outpost by destroying them all.
-cutscene2_case1_line1=The Outpost contains a Market, Loot Chests and Magic Crafters.
-cutscene2_case2_line1=Magic Crafters require no input or electricity, it will produce items for free. This one makes Iron plates.
-cutscene2_case3_line1=You can upgrade the item production speed at the market with coins.
-cutscene2_case4_line1=Biters evolve fast and sometimes multiply when killed hence keep pollution to a minimum by utilizing the free items. 
-cutscene2_case5_line1=Goal of this scenario is to eliminate all biters on the limited size map.
-cutscene2_case5_line2=lets go back to spawn. Good luck and have fun!
-replay_cutscene=To replay the introduction, use the __1__ command
+cutscene2_case0_line1=Outposts are defended by enemy turrets and walls. Turret strength scales with the rewards inside.
+cutscene2_case0_line2=To "capture" an outpost, you must destroy all turrets.
+cutscene2_case1_line1=The Outpost contains a Market, Loot Chests and Magic Crafters (assemblers or chemical plants).
+cutscene2_case2_line1=Magic Crafters require no input or electricity, it will produce items for free. (This one makes Iron Plates.)
+cutscene2_case3_line1=You can upgrade the crafting speed at the (local) market with coins. Some markets contain additional items.
+cutscene2_case4_line1=Biters evolve fast (and sometimes multiply when killed!). Tip: keep pollution to a minimum by utilizing the free items.
+cutscene2_case5_line1=The goal of this scenario is to eliminate all biters and launch a rocket on the limited size map.
+cutscene2_case5_line2=This concludes the tour. Good luck and have fun!
+replay_cutscene=To replay the introduction, use the __1__ command. You can also press the information icon for a text summary.
 
 # locale linked to the quadrants scenario
 [quadrants]