Simplify language, add links, formatting fixes (#2443)

- Avoid time-specific statements (“recently”, “today”, …).

- Move details such as “RPIT” to the speaker notes.

- More links to our slides as well as community documentation.

- Formatting fixes

src/concurrency/async-pitfalls/async-traits.md

@@ -4,22 +4,20 @@ minutes: 5
 
 # Async Traits
 
-Async methods in traits are were stabilized only recently, in the 1.75 release.
+Async methods in traits are were stabilized in the 1.75 release. This required
-This required support for using return-position `impl Trait` (RPIT) in traits,
+support for using return-position `impl Trait` in traits, as the desugaring for
-as the desugaring for `async fn` includes `-> impl Future<Output = ...>`.
+`async fn` includes `-> impl Future<Output = ...>`.
 
-However, even with the native support today there are some pitfalls around
+However, even with the native support, there are some pitfalls around
-`async fn` and RPIT in traits:
+`async fn`:
 
-- Return-position impl Trait captures all in-scope lifetimes (so some patterns
+- Return-position `impl Trait` captures all in-scope lifetimes (so some patterns
-  of borrowing cannot be expressed)
+  of borrowing cannot be expressed).
 
-- Traits whose methods use return-position `impl trait` or `async` are not `dyn`
+- Async traits cannot be used with [trait objects] (`dyn Trait` support).
-  compatible.
 
-If we do need `dyn` support, the crate
+The [async_trait] crate provides a workaround for `dyn` support through a macro,
-[async_trait](https://docs.rs/async-trait/latest/async_trait/) provides a
+with some caveats:
-workaround through a macro, with some caveats:
 
 ```rust,editable,compile_fail
 use async_trait::async_trait;
@@ -47,11 +45,11 @@ async fn run_all_sleepers_multiple_times(
     n_times: usize,
 ) {
     for _ in 0..n_times {
-        println!("running all sleepers..");
+        println!("Running all sleepers...");
         for sleeper in &sleepers {
             let start = Instant::now();
             sleeper.sleep().await;
-            println!("slept for {}ms", start.elapsed().as_millis());
+            println!("Slept for {} ms", start.elapsed().as_millis());
         }
     }
 }
@@ -71,13 +69,21 @@ async fn main() {
 - `async_trait` is easy to use, but note that it's using heap allocations to
   achieve this. This heap allocation has performance overhead.
 
-- The challenges in language support for `async trait` are deep Rust and
+- The challenges in language support for `async trait` are too deep to describe
-  probably not worth describing in-depth. Niko Matsakis did a good job of
+  in-depth in this class. See [this blog post] by Niko Matsakis if you are
-  explaining them in
+  interested in digging deeper. See also these keywords:
-  [this post](https://smallcultfollowing.com/babysteps/blog/2019/10/26/async-fn-in-traits-are-hard/)
+
-  if you are interested in digging deeper.
+  - [RPIT]: short for
+    [return-position `impl Trait`](../../generics/impl-trait.md).
+  - [RPITIT]: short for return-position `impl Trait` in trait (RPIT in trait).
 
 - Try creating a new sleeper struct that will sleep for a random amount of time
-  and adding it to the Vec.
+  and adding it to the `Vec`.
 
 </details>
+
+[async_trait]: https://docs.rs/async-trait/
+[trait objects]: ../../smart-pointers/trait-objects.md
+[this blog post]: https://smallcultfollowing.com/babysteps/blog/2019/10/26/async-fn-in-traits-are-hard/
+[RPIT]: https://doc.rust-lang.org/reference/types/impl-trait.html#abstract-return-types
+[RPITIT]: https://blog.rust-lang.org/2023/12/21/async-fn-rpit-in-traits.html